Woman
Have To Stay at Home
A happy
family is they live in a control social exactly around family. That control
come from every parents. As a wife not required to looking for job in out there,
but they take care of their family. We as a woman, when we have a small family
have to stay at home. There are some aspects why woman have to stay at home.
The first
is to save their children and service their husband. When the woman seldom at
home or we call that a business woman, the woman will be busy with their job. The
children will not get more attentions from their mother and the same with their
husband. So, if a mother does not care about their family automatically their
children will get problem exactly social environment and the husband is not
comfortable when stay at home.
The second
is the woman must manage all things at home. This statement belong to time
manage and do every work at home. Starting from cooking, washing clothe,
cleaning room and etc. I think, if the woman does not stay at home all of works
will unorganized. And I believe a husband want their wife to be an ideal woman
for example to care their children, have a good service for the husband and
to be as educators for children. So, woman have to manage inside the home.
In my
opinion, the woman have not to be a worker in out there because it will leave
work at home. They must to take care for their children and it’s important for
woman to focus on the family. I think that whenever possible, in whatever way
possible, mothers should be the caretakers of their children because no one can
do as good a job as a parent. A family have to care each other to build a good
social interaction.
i like this statement "the woman must manage all things at home"
BalasHapusyeahh i am with u ulfi..
as a good women must stay at home to keep their family heheh
thank you,dude. i agree ur opinion too :)
HapusI agree with u ulfi,,
BalasHapusbut u should see again ur grammatical rule, like to+ Vi, not using Ving..
like ur written in the third paragraph..
thank you sist. you realized me about that, i can revise again.
Hapus