Selasa, 31 Desember 2013

Hortatory essay '' Woman Have To Stay at Home"



Woman Have To Stay at Home

A happy family is they live in a control social exactly around family. That control come from every parents. As a wife not required to looking for job in out there, but they take care of their family. We as a woman, when we have a small family have to stay at home. There are some aspects why woman have to stay at home.
The first is to save their children and service their husband. When the woman seldom at home or we call that a business woman, the woman will be busy with their job. The children will not get more attentions from their mother and the same with their husband. So, if a mother does not care about their family automatically their children will get problem exactly social environment and the husband is not comfortable when stay at home.
The second is the woman must manage all things at home. This statement belong to time manage and do every work at home. Starting from cooking, washing clothe, cleaning room and etc. I think, if the woman does not stay at home all of works will unorganized. And I believe a husband want their wife to be an ideal woman for example to care their children, have a good service for the husband and to be as educators for children. So, woman have to manage inside the home.
In my opinion, the woman have not to be a worker in out there because it will leave work at home. They must to take care for their children and it’s important for woman to focus on the family. I think that whenever possible, in whatever way possible, mothers should be the caretakers of their children because no one can do as good a job as a parent. A family have to care each other to build a good social interaction.


4 komentar:

  1. i like this statement "the woman must manage all things at home"
    yeahh i am with u ulfi..
    as a good women must stay at home to keep their family heheh

    BalasHapus
  2. I agree with u ulfi,,
    but u should see again ur grammatical rule, like to+ Vi, not using Ving..
    like ur written in the third paragraph..

    BalasHapus
    Balasan
    1. thank you sist. you realized me about that, i can revise again.

      Hapus